inspired by speedhorn - my song poem

[MentaL]

http://forum.ragezone.com/showthread.php?p=188357#post188357

here u go
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ive wrote load sof songs on paper here

i wrote this as a poem song so it aint split up

you look up at the world dead and you know it
everyone goes past dont dont try to ignore it
put pennys on your eyes and save your soul
your religiion is none , let them leave u and go

a wound is tempory a smile is forever
but a tombstone and grave leave a memory for the other
you worked so hard dont try to ignore it
you fallen to nothing, was it all worth it?

give yourself a chance you got one oppertunity
if the people you see are shadows, what do they mean to me?
You hear screams in your dreams you vision the hate
your falling forever and your about to wake
the bottom is near and this world will end
will you say goodbye or forever defend

i wrote this a couple of months back, it means allot to me. hope you enjoyed reading.

 

[Speedhorn666]

It's sounds class and seems to flow but I can't work out what it's about. Is it like really deep and I'm just completly missing it? Sum1 work it out, I'm 2 lazy

 

[Hulkster]

Boring..... Make a few rap lyrics or something.

 

[Deathsfear]

I like mental
hulk: personally i hate rap lyrics