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My first attempt at lyrics

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K the song is about how record companies screw bands about by making them change the song so it's more 'radio-friendly'. It also covers how a lot of people only listen to vocals in a song and ignore the creativity etc. This i my 1st ever attempt at lyrics and it is a 1st draft. Comment + rating out of ten if poss, ty ^^

'Everyone's Favourite Song'

Verse
Frustration turns to rage,
As this faceless shit surfaces again,
Black and white? Where's the red?
Creativity rendered obsolete

Something turns to nothing,
In the blink of an eye


Pre Chorus
Blinded by the voice


Chorus
You will never tear us down,
The pledge is way too high,
Your manipulation will never be realised,
Never...


Verse 2
Who wants to hear this?
The misguided sheep are conquering again?
Come take a walk,
The aggression will awaken you


(Pre-Chorus)
(Chorus)
(Guitar Bridge, Solo)
(Chorus)
 
K I'll annotate it in case sum lines seem weird.


'Everyone's Favourite Song'

Verse
Frustration turns to rage,
As this faceless **** surfaces again,
The faceless shit is refference to crap music that is covered by good vocals

Black and white? Where's the red?
Black and white symbolise basics and simplicity or even foudations. Red is originality/creativity
Creativity rendered obsolete

Something turns to nothing,
In the blink of an eye
This part is about how good songs can be made crap by forced changes (instructions from record companies)

Pre Chorus
Blinded by the voice
Reference to listening to nothing but vocals, ignoring the rest

Chorus
You will never tear us down,
The pledge is way too high,
Your manipulation will never be realised,
Never...
Bent record companies will not win

Verse 2
Who wants to hear this?
The misguided sheep are conquering again?
Come take a walk,
The aggression will awaken you
This verse is about making the dudes in the suits realise what this is about.

Hope that clears up any confusion
 
Mate why not make a demo so we can hear what it sounds like when its sung.
Keep it up mate you sound like uve done it before cus they are brill :good:
 
Well there good for a first attempt m8, but there pretty random and in a song they dont link to well, theres not enough ryhming and they seem a little short in places, but its pretty good.
 
ive wrote load sof songs on paper here :)

i wrote this as a poem song so it aint split up



you look up at the world dead and you know it
everyone goes past dont dont try to ignore it
put pennys on your eyes and save your soul
your religiion is none , let them leave u and go

a wound is tempory a smile is forever
but a tombstone and grave leave a memory for the other
you worked so hard dont try to ignore it
you fallen to nothing, was it all worth it?

give yourself a chance you got one oppertunity
if the people you see are shadows, what do they mean to me?
You hear screams in your dreams you vision the hate
your falling forever and your about to wake
the bottom is near and this world will end
will you say goodbye or forever defend

i wrote this a couple of months back, it means allot to me. hope you enjoyed reading.
 
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Rage said:
Well there good for a first attempt m8, but there pretty random and in a song they dont link to well, theres not enough ryhming and they seem a little short in places, but its pretty good.
YAY finally sum real non-biased feedback. Cheerz every1 but u were all chattin shit :P Thx Rage m8, I'll work on it, c if I can get it flowing and make the subject a lil more focused. :good:
 
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