okay, My second C4D signature since easter.

[hirugashi]

okay, this is my 2nd go at it. ><

Rate... D: dont be mean tho D=

 

[purpleNblack2]

i can see you did good,
but you made your canvas too big, and you tried showing everything.
you don't have too. but anyways, really good try.

 

[Clysse]

too large and poor focal placement

 

[patrickisit]

too big for me.
the render quality is a little low.
but, good try.

 

[Laced]

too large and poor focal placement

Agreed and also i suggest not going straight into C4D's when you start making sigs.

I suggest you just look at beginner tuts and start from there and move on, C4D's will take some time to get use to and what not.

 

[hirugashi]

i see i see. :\ time to gruel over some Tutorials. D:

 

[HydroBenZ]

Too big, agreed with the other posts above me. I, personally don't like straight-on C4D signatures, with a whole bunch put in there. It just totally kills the whole sig.

 

[Popozow1012]

little too big
low quality
good c4d's though

 

[soulreaper33]

Just asking- what would be a good size for a sig? I think 340x120 is too small :/

 

[spikensbror]

Just asking- what would be a good size for a sig? I think 340x120 is too small :/

This is offtopic, post it in a new post. But to answer you question, 400 x150 is pretty ok. ^^

The sig seems oversaturated(Overcontrasted?).