One of my first

[iCohns]

This is one of my first, i followed a tutorial.. lol i am shitty so dont be to harsh.

~Cohns

 

[blyddlyl]

Looks nicely done =O

 

[iCohns]

Looks nicely done =O

Thanks, but there must be anything wrong with it what i need to improve?

 

[blyddlyl]

Light source abit too bright..

 

[cowjuice]

lol if this is ur first then u've go a good future ahead of u >.<

 

[iCohns]

Thanks.

 

[NTV]

this is good for a first...
i wasn't like this until my 3rd.
although, it was probably because i didnt bother reading the tutorials.

 

[spikensbror]

Very nicely done. ^^
Witch font is that?

 

[cowjuice]

lol yea i barely read tht tuts just followed them >.< big mistake, lol barely learned anything

 

[Sundays]

Great first time signature. Excellent.

 

[Heaven]

If you don't give the beginners any good C.C, they won't really improve.
First of all, the light source is too bright. The tag is plain, no affects. Naruto's hair is a different color at the light source. Text isn't good either.

 

[Sundays]

Fine. Then mr kuni

Well Maybe try adding some Better text, such as clipping masks.
Try bluring some of the outside of the signature so the the people of the signature would be look right at the sig. Also try some gradient map then soft light, and photo filters, would help the signature alot =O

 

[purpleNblack2]

this is hella good for a first
but heres some cnc >o<
light source, too bright,
text, dont add, its good without it anyways, tbh, its sometimes better without it
add some depth and flow, and blend the colors with some gradients
oh, and the light source, its behind and infront of the render so, might wanna fix that,
very good, pwns my first sig!

 

[iNs@nE]

For a first, it's neatly done. You'll do good.

 

[Savage]

Excellent for a first mate, read up on some tutorials and you'll be producing some beautiful work in no time. The light source is a little strong, but it looks like that's your only problem. Great job.

 

[Laced]

Very good for your first time.

All i would suggest on doing, is making the light source a little darker.

 

[iCohns]

Very nicely done. ^^
Witch font is that?

Font: Myriad Pro.

And thnx all for the tips.

Here i tried to do some thing with it to improve:
1-Gradient + less light, no text

2-Gradient + text + Less light.

3-Color + less light, No text

 

[purpleNblack2]

is it like a black and white gradient tool you used? or gradient map >o<
lower the opacity of the gradient