Psd n' html website1 by Adobe404

[Adobe404]

Hello there ragezone!

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This its the first website I releasing and I hop I'll enjoy ragezone forum My friend tol me to join it because he said that my design looks pretty good as a beginner. I have work with html/photoshop 2 weeks. I'am still practining how to work with them. So I hop I can get some help " Leave a comment below to help me get better ". Enough info about this.

:::WEBSITE INFO:::
The website its create'd by me 100% the design/coding. BUT I didn't code it because I have non time for it. So you some are going to use this website REMEMBER TO CODE IT. I just change'd the background on it and I did SLICE IT. If you want only the .psd file just pm me here at ragezone and I'll send you the download link.

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- Adobe404

 

[Matt Clarke]

Seen better. This is only a PSD? Make a website that has full coding. No point releasing a PSD, from past experience of releasing some. PSD's are practically useless to this FlyFF Section, people just want to be spoon fed, some of them dont know how to code the website. No offence, I bet you dont know how too either.

4/10

 

[Improved]

Stop posting useless comments as "bad design" and other non-relevant comments. If you have to post in the release section, you come with constructive critique. In what way do you think saying his design is bad is going to improve his skills if you do not point him in the correct direction? Stop it, it leads to flame.

 

[Adobe404]

Seen better. This is only a PSD? Make a website that has full coding. No point releasing a PSD, from past experience of releasing some. PSD's are practically useless to this FlyFF Section, people just want to be spoon fed, some of them dont know how to code the website. No offence, I bet you dont know how too either.

4/10

Thanks for responing! Well, I have to learn full coding. I'am practining how html works. When I know it 100% like my own language I'll keep make html websites.Btw! Yea I know, They looking for fully html/css, But as I said.. I dont know that language that much :S
- Adobe404

 

[spikensbror]

Stretched sprites/renders, very bad blending and HORRIBLE alignments.
Not gonna rate in that shit 1/10 system as the scale doesn't go low enough.
I suggest you try using the grid or placing rulers and develop some kind of system as of aligning content.

 

[Langstra]

I think Spikerbror is overreacting, but it is not a very good design I have to agree. The top images look pretty random, there is no connection at all. The top image is just bad, it is distracting because it is bad. The text over the middle image, do not do that.
You have a way too large font, make it smaller. Maybe that it fits in the menu but in the content areas it is too large. Also a tip, make the headers smaller than the content text and making menu bar text all in upper-case looks good.
You have the content areas bad aligned. It needs more space between the text and the edges of your box. That was hard for you because you had a very large font.
The content boxes are bad positioned to each other. They all need to have a specific amount of space between them, this now looks pretty random. The top side box need to be on the same height as the top of the main box AND they need the same opacity. The space between the side box and the main box need to be the same as the space between to side boxes and the same as the space between the main box and the menu bar.

I hope you can learn from this, because it is not very good what you made. A 2/10 is probably right here.

 

[Adobe404]

Stretched sprites/renders, very bad blending and HORRIBLE alignments.
Not gonna rate in that shit 1/10 system as the scale doesn't go low enough.
I suggest you try using the grid or placing rulers and develop some kind of system as of aligning content.

Thanks for the comment! By the way, did you even read what the mod typed there up? LAWL...

I think Spikerbror is overreacting, but it is not a very good design I have to agree. The top images look pretty random, there is no connection at all. The top image is just bad, it is distracting because it is bad. The text over the middle image, do not do that.
You have a way too large font, make it smaller. Maybe that it fits in the menu but in the content areas it is too large. Also a tip, make the headers smaller than the content text and making menu bar text all in upper-case looks good.
You have the content areas bad aligned. It needs more space between the text and the edges of your box. That was hard for you because you had a very large font.
The content boxes are bad positioned to each other. They all need to have a specific amount of space between them, this now looks pretty random. The top side box need to be on the same height as the top of the main box AND they need the same opacity. The space between the side box and the main box need to be the same as the space between to side boxes and the same as the space between the main box and the menu bar.

I hope you can learn from this, because it is not very good what you made. A 2/10 is probably right here.

I trying my best! I like'd the website, so I dedcided to public it. Thanks for the comment !

 

[Matt Clarke]

Thanks for the comment! By the way, did you even read what the mod typed there up? LAWL...



I trying my best! I like'd the website, so I dedcided to public it. Thanks for the comment !

Its not a website, its an image.

 

[Adobe404]

Its not a website, its an image.

Its an image but its a website template.

 

[mikederoobs]

I Love it But. Please Code it, Becouse Much ppl here dont know how to code them to php or html.

 

[Improved]

Thanks for the comment! By the way, did you even read what the mod typed there up? LAWL...

He gave you advice to where to improve, that's what matters. It is not a very good design and he is pointing out what to get better with. An opinion is an opinion regardless if it is bad or good. We just don't want flame wars in these threads.

 

[audisbroder]

Really bad design, to be seriously. It's alot off more better designs out there, But keep it up! Don't be angry or something else. Just keep it up like now