Second stock attempt

[I Rule YU]

Constructive criticism and comments please.

Took me about 45 minutes for the whole thing -- there are tons of layers. I am fairly impressed with myself. I followed a .PSD tutorial.

 

[i8garfield]

Hard to get a good look at render. Lighting is kind of off and text isn't flowing very well.

Better then I could though.

Good job.

 

[KikiKANNIBAL]

Good job ^_^
Nice light source
and pen tooling i believe that is ;p

 

[Clysse]

text and random vector by text is weird

but good job
7/10

 

[alexdesire]

could be allot brighter it seems very dark and you cant make out much