Text needs a lot of work, and there's to little effects.
Try placing the text more adjacent to the render/sprite and putting some
more effects.
Even if it is a only smudge tag, you can add more layers of smudging on top and such
to kind of create a flow if you know what i mean. ;D
No flow, the smudging on his feet made the blue out of place, the bubble c4d on the tip of the sword(if I'm right), does fit in with your title, but the text is horrible.