I like the movement, but I think you could improve on the balance a bit. The sharpness of the diagonally right down part is nice, but you could blur out the rightmost red web thing just a bit and use "burn" a bit more on the corners. And for settings, set to burn lights too, since, the red stands out. The text color feels a bit dark, and, the red blurred c4d seems a bit too much (too blurred, too.. much space) compared to the more blurry dark top right. Other than the that, your render was well integrated, and I really like how whatever red thing you used actually looks like a web coming out of him!