Wth is that white thing?
Well text is great, well to me it is,
and very much this reminds me of a tag I think it was you or kuniiyo did.
looks very similar.
well, smudge. Smudge is good, it could be better.
v1's smudging beats v2's smudging.
but v2's colors are way better than v1. good job, i guess? for practice.