Something i wrote..

[MentaL]

well i been writing allot of songs lately here is the main chorus of one... think about it.

If the hole is hollow and life fades away, explain emotion which tears away an existence that should never be, corrupted and full of hate war is a past time don

 

[Solares]

not bad actually

 

[Spunkeh]

not bad keep up the good work

 

[DonTonberry]

Was That The One You Recited To Me The Other Day?

Post Some Of Your Poetry To, That Owned

 

[Speedhorn666]

sweet,show us sum more man

 

[exclamatio]

thats quite good, flows quite well ^.^

 

[azkiz]

nice good work

 

[Sceb]

nice mate :good:

 

[MentaL]

anyone thought about it?

noob

 

[GohanSSJ]

I did, and really, if you can write a whole song with such a text which ofcourse can be used in a song (otherwise you could always write poetry) then you really could do something with that.

 

[Nik-C]

If the hole is hollow and life fades away
explain emotion which tears away
an existence that should never be
corrupted and full of hate
war is a past time don

 

[GohanSSJ]

Sadly that's true... >.<