Sonic

[ushpen]

This kinda messy, just say whatever you want. i dont care.

V2
With light on his hand.

 

[Batz]

That's shadow... But I don't like it. It's just red and boring. Nothing within it makes an impact.

 

[Laced]

Really boring.

It's all the same color adn the effects don't stand out at all.

 

[Jake?]

Really boring.

It's all the same color adn the effects don't stand out at all.

agree'd.

 

[ushpen]

That's shadow... But I don't like it. It's just red and boring. Nothing within it makes an impact.

Lol, i only realizes that it is really boring after you said that. It made me laugh. Thanks

 

[buzzfizz]

Instead of using red, why not use shadow's original colour?

 

[Savage]

Agreed with buzzfizz.
Using Shadow's real color would make him stand out more, and would make it coordinate better.
But still, the ffects would be dry, blurry, and messy. Work on it some more.
Find a better text.

 

[Hauyser]

Way to monotone and the focal stinks, not good, not good.

 

[ushpen]

Ok guys, i might try all of your suggestions, but i guess its really hard for me to do that. Well thanks to all of you.