Great CnC here i notice, stop flaming.. or at least add in what you think about it.. really, nobody gives a shit about your post count (untill your name is GOLD!)
and It's got decent smudging, but the lighting angle between her skin and the lighting of the BG don't match. The next is a little big, i know it's to fill some of the empty space.. but it's a little TOO big, and sticks out more than the focal