Spiderman

[HydroBenZ]

Made this for my battle with Josh VS. Sundays/Cowjuice
I want some CnC first though before I submit it

Rate/CnC

Note: I think this is my best so far

 

[KikiKANNIBAL]

Moar light source

 

[Vi3tb0i2ty]

More light source and kinda to epic :O but good job

 

[HydroBenZ]

More light source and kinda to epic :O

Too epic?
Lolz, sureeee...

Alright, I'll try to work on the light source.

 

[Vi3tb0i2ty]

Well, not that epic, but ehh, its ok

 

[KikiKANNIBAL]

Not epic
Just overdone and doesnt help with the flow

 

[HydroBenZ]

think of it as him..falling...

 

[cowjuice]

lol falling into lots of stuff >.< i think its good but yea mb more LS like ther est sed

 

[HydroBenZ]

Ehh oh well..this is for my battle so yea

 

[cowjuice]

the one with josh and sundays? lol im in tht tooo

 

[HydroBenZ]

Yes I know you are

 

[HeavenlyFlow]

I notice the C4Ds more than the focal.

 

[cowjuice]

yea im gonna agree with flow on tht too, mb lower the opacity or blur it a lil?

 

[purpleNblack2]

More light source and kinda to epic :O but good job

this is not really that epic, tbh

I notice the C4Ds more than the focal.

you are correct my friend >o<
the c4d's i think you used that a bit too much
work on flow too