Two new signs that i have made

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W00t i havnt done this for 3 months nd will here are my two new ones
This one i didnt put much details on it
GotRice10 - Two new signs that i have made - RaGEZONE Forums

THis i like alot took me bout 3 hrs :P (border is browish color)
GotRice10 - Two new signs that i have made - RaGEZONE Forums



Tell me how i can improve:play_ball
 
  • 1st:
  • to bleu
  • moving text :bad:
  • image not blended into background (no a bleu hat and a bleu background don't work)
  • background is partly in his head... seems painfull to me :S
  • no border :S
  • 2e:
  • look like bad qualitiy
  • no border
  • blending is beter but you almost have no background :(
  • it's not saying "WOUW LOOK ME!".
advice:

good for a beginning ****. But think of something more! Diffrent collor beter blending! exciting backgrounds and cool pictures!

i'll await your next banners :D
 
  • 1st:
  • to bleu
  • moving text :bad:
  • image not blended into background (no a bleu hat and a bleu background don't work)
  • background is partly in his head... seems painfull to me :S
  • no border :S
  • 2e:
  • look like bad qualitiy
  • no border
  • blending is beter but you almost have no background :(
  • it's not saying "WOUW LOOK ME!".
advice:

good for a beginning ****. But think of something more! Diffrent collor beter blending! exciting backgrounds and cool pictures!

i'll await your next banners :D

ok but it does have a border << first one is black second one is brownish
 
Personally I like the transformers one better. It uses more colors and is very vibrant. It doesn't have a bunch of bright colors, but it does catch your eye when you see the red. You could possible add a brighter color for the brownish color, that would make it look a bit more appealing.

As for the first one, the person really shouldn't be faded out like that, if you want to do something like that try and use 4 layers, 1 overlay, 1 blur, 1 color change, and an invert or something. The flat blue, really isn't all that appealing. The background doesn't look very good either, the lines are repeatetive and aren't very.. Artistic, if I could say. The effect is nice, but the text is a little off center and the colors don't match the picture colors what-so-ever.

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Hope to see more work from you later on, your beginning work is excellent for your skill level.
 
When someone is asking for help, there is no need just to critiqe them unless you actually going to give them advice, so honestly just leave if your not lol.
 
Stop doing fucking drive by'ing trying to insult those who comment others signatures.
 
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