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I'm on the fence about this, in my opinion the background of the circle, including Chinese/Japanese letters is completely unrelated to the topic: X-men or Wolverine. Also the text, the masks and the stroke, look really awful - the font also doesn't tie in with the theme. Possibly try using a different 'futuristic' font as well.
IMO:
- Terrible cutting of the image on the borders. The image/render needs to be inside the width and length. Nothing should be "cut off" like the legs and "ears." Shrink the render or fit it in a way that it would look nice, but not cut off. A blend, smudge, border, or a C4D can be used to hid the "cut offs."
- Dont like the text. The text should always be clean, where the colors should blend nicely. It looks as if you overlayed a part of the render onto it. More effects need to be added to make this overlay work.
Render looks nice and I like the effects on it. Like I said, the image would look great if it wasnt cut off like that, especially on the top (bottom is fine I guess...)
Actually "Japanese" is related to Wolverine; he marries a Japanese woman and has a son with her.
IMO:
- Terrible cutting of the image on the borders. The image/render needs to be inside the width and length. Nothing should be "cut off" like the legs and "ears." Shrink the render or fit it in a way that it would look nice, but not cut off. A blend, smudge, border, or a C4D can be used to hid the "cut offs."
- Dont like the text. The text should always be clean, where the colors should blend nicely. It looks as if you overlayed a part of the render onto it. More effects need to be added to make this overlay work.
Render looks nice and I like the effects on it. Like I said, the image would look great if it wasnt cut off like that, especially on the top (bottom is fine I guess...)
Actually "Japanese" is related to Wolverine; he marries a Japanese woman and has a son with her.
IMO:
- Terrible cutting of the image on the borders. The image/render needs to be inside the width and length. Nothing should be "cut off" like the legs and "ears." Shrink the render or fit it in a way that it would look nice, but not cut off. A blend, smudge, border, or a C4D can be used to hid the "cut offs."
- Dont like the text. The text should always be clean, where the colors should blend nicely. It looks as if you overlayed a part of the render onto it. More effects need to be added to make this overlay work.
Render looks nice and I like the effects on it. Like I said, the image would look great if it wasnt cut off like that, especially on the top (bottom is fine I guess...)
Actually "Japanese" is related to Wolverine; he marries a Japanese woman and has a son with her.
I think something else can be added to hide the cut off on the bottom; a C4D or a render that "flows" upward in a curvy direction would make it better imo.Depending on how it is cut, and what it is being cut on I think that cutting off the legs is fine, but cutting of the top is really bad imo
I don't believe in the comics he did marry a Japanese woman, In the film yes - the render used is of the comic based Wolverine.
I think the runes are fine. Sure the runes are not related to slice and dice, but its a background that looks good with the renderI myself cut that image. ( I know I am very bad at cutting =l
Those runes are called arcane runes ( in games like aqw )
They look good to me. But yes, I think it does not relate to x-men.
I will try to do version 2. Change the text, bg and add something more.
Thanks for the feedback guys!
Totally agree. It's good but def something missingI think something else can be added to hide the cut off on the bottom; a C4D or a render that "flows" upward in a curvy direction would make it better imo.
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I think the runes are fine. Sure the runes are not related to slice and dice, but its a background that looks good with the render