3v again :x

[mrcoolandliljoe]

v1.

v2.

v3.

Please give comment and give tips because i dont know what its missing but i know its missing something.

 

[HeavenlyFlow]

Forced lighting and random smudging.

Nothing appealing, IMO.

 

[ptkarnould]

Corner near the render is way to bright, and it's plain white which totally breaks the colour spectrum.
The sharpened things popping out aren't very appealing either, and it's a bit boring everywhere except the render area.
It's just mediocre, just work on technical design next time.