Bioshock

[Savage]

Looks pretty simple, but it took 25 layers. But hey, maybe that makes it look worse. I'm not too sure how I like the outcome, it's not all that good. Here's what I think is wrong with it:

• Too much smudging.
• Not efficient use of C4Ds.
• Too dark / not enough light sources.
• Text is horrible (my text is always horrible).

Oh well, we'll see what people think.

 

[spikensbror]

I love the surrounding effects.
The text stands out too much though and the twirl at the top of the drill seems a bit too "out of place".

 

[KikiKANNIBAL]

Bring out your focal more, too much smudging is never a problem unless done wrong, in this case, it's okay. If you think yourself that the text is bad, leave it out, especially in this case when its so distracting it takes away from your focal. try some burning to add some depth

 

[Trimatic]

The smudging looks really weird and like kikki said, it needs some depth.

 

[Sundays]

Hmm. The blue thing in the middle is quite distracting. Hehe.. Try changing those could fix the text a bit otherless nice.

 

[Crawl]

Whats that thing in the middle?

A robot or a alien :3

 

[Tai]

Whats that thing in the middle?

A robot or a alien :3

It's a thing from Bioshock...hence the title.

 

[Crawl]

Never heard / seen something about bioshock so i dont know what it is