Forever Falling - Since the Day You Left (Lyrics)

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Hi,
I'm in a metalcore band and I've recently wrote these lyrics and I need some feedback and constructive criticism to help me improve on them; these mean a lot so I want to make them absolutely perfect before my band starts to make music for them.

It was written in the skies that one day you'd leave,
I was unprepared for the worst and my heart wepted and grieved
We never said our goodbyes and words were left unsaid
Watching you in pain as you lie sorrowly in your bed
How could I said goodbye when I kept hope instilled in my heart
Drowning doubts of leaving, so I'll carry upon your part you engraved in
this world
So when I see you next I can say I made you proud!

Since the day you left
I swore to myself that I'd carry these words
To the doors of every soul
To keep their hearts beating and their lungs breathing
Since the day you left
Since the day you left
I'll carry on your legacy, I wish you could walk with me!

Looking upon what was the shell of a wonder
The floor cracked, tears turned to rain and my voice into thunder
You laid so peacefully and gracefully
WHY'D YOU HAVE TO GO?!
WHY'D YOU HAVE TO GO?!
Now sit among the clouds, smiling amongst the angels
Even though your gone your story still goes on.
I'm twice of the man that I used to be - only thanks to you

NOW I HEAR YOUR VOICE SCREAMING
NOW I HEAR YOUR VOICE SCREAMING
THERE'S GOT. TO. BE. A WAY TO GET YOU BACK!!!

Since the day you left
I swore to myself that I'd carry these words
To the doors of every soul
To keep their hearts beating and their lungs breathing
Since the day you left
Since the day you left
I'll carry on your legacy, I wish you could walk with me!

Since the day you left...
I'm twice the man, that you used to see!
and that's. thanks. to. you!