Rico

[Wucas]

So after taking some suggestions from Scratch and Mucski,
from my older thread i decided to try again with a little
different style, and adding some new techniques, idk, looked
better in my head, but this as good as it is going to get.

Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated. (9th day with
a tablet so I'm still really in the dark)

Rico in her 20s? Idk ;D (Gunslinger Girl)

 

[Scratch]

i think you did a better job now now you just need to umprove the coloring and the outlines, and you will become a chibi maker :w00t:

 

[ChewBecca]

I would work on hands (although they are like the hardest part to draw) and the mouth, and what scratch said. Nice job!

 

[Shoelace]

This looks really nice a few touches here and there and it will be GREAT

 

[Irahnik]

that head is ginormous.

 

[Wucas]

that head is ginormous.

I can see every comment except this one... for the style
I really thought the head was perfect in size o.o

 

[Mucski]

You did better from last time however

First off , never use the paint bucket in photoshop , on manually drawn lines. Why? It leaves weird white artifacts on your precious image. If you don't believe me , watch closer and you will see them.

The right hand is smaller than the left hand , however theoretically , the right hand is closer to the screen , so it should be larger. Much larger.

Her body ... she doesn't have an butt ... at all. You need to practice to draw naked female characters first in different positions. No , not porn , just like a pupet.

Also when I imported it in photoshop , why is everything transparent? You should use a white background when you draw.

Also depending on your video card , you should have anti aliasing settings. Those jagy lines ain't nice at all.

 

[Wucas]

You did better from last time however

First off , never use the paint bucket in photoshop , on manually drawn lines. Why? It leaves weird white artifacts on your precious image. If you don't believe me , watch closer and you will see them.

The right hand is smaller than the left hand , however theoretically , the right hand is closer to the screen , so it should be larger. Much larger.

Her body ... she doesn't have an butt ... at all. You need to practice to draw naked female characters first in different positions. No , not porn , just like a pupet.

Also when I imported it in photoshop , why is everything transparent? You should use a white background when you draw.

Also depending on your video card , you should have anti aliasing settings. Those jagy lines ain't nice at all.

1. (Paint Bucket) I actually never have noticed that
before o.o that definitely explains alot

2. (Hand) Yah I really just couldn't seem to get it
right, i was trying to make it appear as though the
fingers were covering each other, but the shadow wasn't
enough, that is the only reason I was trying to make
it smaller. Is it widee enough?

3. (butt) Yah, really nothing to say to this except I'll
give the next one an butt I guess ^^;

4. (Transparent) I used Sai Paint tool until the very
last stages of this drawing (which then I ported it over
to photoshop)in which the background looks white but
is actually transparent, just forgot to re add the white
layer behind

5. (Anti-aliasing) I honestly had no idea what that was
used for ;D.

Thanks, this post really help a lot.

 

[Mucski]

Notice the hand that is closer to the screen? It's much larger. Somethign that would happen in reallife too , if you do the same position towards a camera.

You need to practice drawing in perspective 3D.

 

[Z1ls]

Yeah not that other hand that should be closer looks smaller and it should be bigger, but if i wont check those "realistic" things, it's really nice, i think you are improving in drawing