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Hello, thought I'd submit some deviantart, and I'm going to share it with you guys as I'd like to get your opinion. :
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font is pretty bad actually, doesnt fit the style and colour of the bg doesnt match the render either. Should've gone for a soft orange or something...
Sorry, I thought you asked for his OPINION? That's what he gave. Also, I don't really like it. Background does not really suit the render in my opinion, looks pretty basic too.Orange?:laugh::laugh::laugh: Are you joking me?
And funnily enough the stroke is the exact same colour as the background, so idk what you're chatting about it doesn't match the background colour, lol.
Whatever man. You must understand I'm not trying to bash you. Just saying what it looks like to me. Of course it has lightning, but the lightning doesn't reflect anywhere except on render. The background, and its blending to render is what you, as a signature artist, should be focused on, as the render is already made by someone else. Yet the background doesn't blend with render in anyway, not with lightning/environment, not with theme, not with anything. So it looks just boring.Actually, there's a lot of lighting if you use your eyes. I formed a shadow on the left side of her body, and lightened some of the area on her hair, as you can see on the bottom of the extension coming from her hair there is a slight dark patch, as where I lighted the rest of the hair. They're not brushes, it's a background with HDR toning, contrast and an outer glow I added. I added some basic snow flake-ish things, adding various sized white dots across the image, and yes, it is basic, it took me lessthan 5 minutes so I'm not going to make it advanced and graphically sophisticated, just a simple test and I thought I might aswell had post it. As for the orange thing, Jamie, lol, I asked for a rate and an opinion, not changes on the colour scheme, thanks for the feedback everyone.
Whatever man. You must understand I'm not trying to bash you. Just saying what it looks like to me. Of course it has lightning, but the lightning doesn't reflect anywhere except on render. The background, and its blending to render is what you, as a signature artist, should be focused on, as the render is already made by someone else. Yet the background doesn't blend with render in anyway, not with lightning/environment, not with theme, not with anything. So it looks just boring.
Basically, you take a beautiful image, crop it to a signature size, and it still looks nice. But when you ask people on constructive criticism, you're asking on opinions on YOUR work, which would just be cropping the image. Which is hardly anything special.
That's pretty much what we have here. You took a render, and you managed to not make it ugly.