Adriana Lima

[Onnagata]

i tried something new. how is it?
yes simple, i'll add some stuff later also. but for now...

ok...updated. better or worse? maybe i overdid the c4d's...

 

[[PAIN]EvoLuTioN]

this girl is sexy 9/10 good job ...

 

[Rainwizzard]

Nice coloring, but it needs more effects and the text would look better if it was a little faded. The border should never be more then 4-5 pixels.

 

[CioNide]

Try some sharp abstract brushes for the background.

 

[^MalaysiaStyle^]

Nice coloring, but it needs more effects and the text would look better if it was a little faded. The border should never be more then 4-5 pixels.

Try some sharp abstract brushes for the background.

agreed with them.. improve some part..
make it look more kewl. xD

 

[buzzfizz]

I dont know why, but the sig has something missing...

Though very good job.

 

[alexdesire]

>_> Floating head syndrome

 

[Onnagata]

thnx guys. yea imma add some more abstract stuff and all to it. and i'll see what i can do bout what you said bout text and border.

>_> Floating head syndrome

ahaha! yea i love heads. body's ok. maybe next time i'll try something with a full body.

 

[Onnagata]

updated...

 

[Savage]

I like v2 much better.

 

[theninjaway]

nice use of c4d.

 

[Onnagata]

thnx. blinding isnt it.

 

[scrat55]

V2 is way better! gj! but reduce the light under the face. its blinding

 

[Rainwizzard]

Less contrast and blend the C4Ds a little bit

 

[alexdesire]

V2 is better but why only who her head?

Move her head up to about her fore head to the top of the page so you can see her shoulders.

 

[Ridiculous]

Nice work on the sig, 8/10.

 

[~DN]

good sign 7/10