Death Note L

[purpleNblack2]

Well, here it is, I'm glad the text works with the sig,
really constructive criticism please.
I dislike the anime, only because the ending was horrible.

v1:

v2:

Seriously, criticism and cnc please.

 

[Heaven]

Not seeing much here, you can do better.
Depth isn't very good imo, text is alright but to distracting. Blend that in more.
The hair is just blurred and badly colored, looks BLACK. The effects are pretty much basic imo, not one of your best.

 

[purpleNblack2]

Not seeing much here, you can do better.
Depth isn't very good imo, text is alright but to distracting. Blend that in more.
The hair is just blurred and badly colored, looks BLACK. The effects are pretty much basic imo, not one of your best.

hmmmm, you think so?
the render, don't blame me, they were all bad and this one was the best, even though its a bit dark.
how would you think I can make the depth better?
and i know the effects are really basic, but, im not really using any c4d's so,,
don't c4d's make it more unique?

oh yea, and L's hair is normall black >.<
i blended to be brown

Edit: and for the people who will just follow josh's post (kunniyo), don't bother, it's plain stupid, alright?
those posts do deserve reports

 

[Heaven]

Well, for a way to create depth is smudging the render a bit, not too much though.

 

[purpleNblack2]

Well, for a way to create depth is smudging the render a bit, not too much though.

hmmmmm,, thanx, will do in v3.
i wasn't really quite sure how to give this tag depth though, i will smudge a stock actually, and blend it.

more cnc please and criticism

 

[iNs@nE]

Bad text. Plainish Background. Bad blending. No feel if you ask me. Keep at it. You'll start doin good someday.

 

[KikiKANNIBAL]

If all the renders were bad quality.
Dont choose a L render.
Simple as that

 

[purpleNblack2]

Bad text. Plainish Background. Bad blending. No feel if you ask me. Keep at it. You'll start doin good someday.

well, i understand what you mean. XP
this isn't my best anyway.
i can't really get creative these days. =/

If all the renders were bad quality.
Dont choose a L render.
Simple as that

=.=
thanx you kyle. >.<
real big help, haha, lol.
well, i only wanted to do it cuz, i thought this would be good with the text.

any how to make it better?


Edit: no cnc? thats crazy.
cnc please.

 

[Life.Life]

You were getting cnc all this time.
Imo, you always seem to complain and make excuses. Just admit on some parts that it looks like crap.
Anyways, add a border. It really makes the difference. Depth can be created by putting a few different layers about your render.

 

[purpleNblack2]

You were getting cnc all this time.
Imo, you always seem to complain and make excuses. Just admit on some parts that it looks like crap.
Anyways, add a border. It really makes the difference. Depth can be created by putting a few different layers about your render.

haha =.= well you seem to think that,
and what excuses do you think i made?
well, i know that i've been getting cnc but i meant, a bit more?
i dont want to just add smudging on v3 and finish it like that.
i will add border.
thanx for actually telling me to do something life.
and i never said it doesn't look like crap, read all the posts.
a lot of ure tags, well, what i've seen so far, they look like crap too.

 

[Life.Life]

a lot of ure tags, well, what i've seen so far, they look like crap too.

There was no need to get into that, now was there? This was a thread about your signatures not mine.

 

[KikiKANNIBAL]

haha =.= well you seem to think that,
and what excuses do you think i made?
well, i know that i've been getting cnc but i meant, a bit more?
i dont want to just add smudging on v3 and finish it like that.
i will add border.
thanx for actually telling me to do something life.
and i never said it doesn't look like crap, read all the posts.
a lot of ure tags, well, what i've seen so far, they look like crap too.

That was not called for.
Hes completely right.
This is a thread about your tags, not his.
And for the record, his are better then yours.
You have no right calling his crap.
Hes just giving you CnC, which you asked for.
:sneaky2:

 

[purpleNblack2]

That was not called for.
Hes completely right.
This is a thread about your tags, not his.
And for the record, his are better then yours.
You have no right calling his crap.
Hes just giving you CnC, which you asked for.
:sneaky2:

=.=
okay, i never did truly mean it,
it was just to go back at him for saying i complain too much?
and actually, i don't really think his tags are crap,
i like it and they are way better than mine.
and yes, like i said i was glad he gave me atleast something.

 

[Life.Life]

That was not called for.
Hes completely right.
This is a thread about your tags, not his.
And for the record, his are better then yours.
You have no right calling his crap.
Hes just giving you CnC, which you asked for.
:sneaky2:

ilyt :blush:

In all honestly, if your going to over-react over a few words I suggest you take some type of therpy. This isn't the first time I saw you do this as well.

 

[cowjuice]

ilyt :blush:

In all honestly, if your going to over-react over a few words I suggest you take some type of therpy. This isn't the first time I saw you do this as well.

thats some how true >.< but i totaly lol'ed at this =) ur tag is too dark for me =] well the sides looks like its just black, effects are pretty basic even for u =] keep trying bro ^^

 

[blyddlyl]

Nice but it looks like c4d + render ( alittle blurring ) + text.. nothing special :x

 

[purpleNblack2]

ilyt :blush:

In all honestly, if your going to over-react over a few words I suggest you take some type of therpy. This isn't the first time I saw you do this as well.

alright, sorry. okay?
lets get off this subject.
now, just quit saying that i make too much excuses. i should know by now if i did, even since you told me like 5 times already, which i believe is enough.

thats some how true >.< but i totaly lol'ed at this =) ur tag is too dark for me =] well the sides looks like its just black, effects are pretty basic even for u =] keep trying bro ^^

thanks cow for repearing what everyone else said.
ure the best
you help me so much ^^

Nice but it looks like c4d + render ( alittle blurring ) + text.. nothing special :x

haha, blyddlyl, im not getting anything back at you,
but the same goes for you. =/ im just being quite honest
your tags are simpler with c4d placement and render placement.
and i know its simple, and its not my best,
thanx guys.

but if it is too simple why not give me some good cnc so i can make it better?
instead of repeating cnc, uhhum
[cough]cow[/cough]

 

[Venereal]

your tags are simpler with c4d placement and render placement.

Did you forget the situation with Life.Life that fast? We just went over discussing other peoples signatures in your signature thread. :glare:

repearing]

What does the mean?

 

[cowjuice]

he says that i ALWAYS repeat what ever ppl say...

 

[purpleNblack2]

Did you forget the situation with Life.Life that fast? We just went over discussing other peoples signatures in your signature thread. :glare:

no, i did not actually.
and i was never flaming, it's probably just the way you read it, and when i posted that in his thread, it was just an honest post.
i did give him some cnc and it wasn't repeated too.
you got problems with honest people, don't you?

he says that i ALWAYS repeat what ever ppl say...

actually, yes, most of the time.
or it's just a huge coincidence.
it's either you review other posts, which i believe so, and then post ure cnc, which is already said,
or you have nothing to say, and if so, don't post.


now, if we can get off this subject and if anyone can give me some cnc.