First Sig

[HeartHazard]

Eh i looked over a lot of tuts and then i decided to free ball it xD
but i made it really simple not really to good with C4d w/e you call that o_0

well thats it xD

 

[JonoH]

Its Good.
I just dont like The Font.
Maybe take it out. and put somethign on the left
Not sure what though
LOL

 

[Dim]

Take out or edit the text and put a border on it, not bad for a first . Try some brushes/smudging, gradient backgrounds and lighting effects. Try some tutorials on deviantart too.

 

[HydroBenZ]

More flow and depth.

 

[HeartHazard]

thx for all the comments ill work on a new one soon enough =]

 

[mixte]

very good.. lot better than my first .. 7.5/10 .. ye.. change the font .. .. make it blend in better