First Signature

[Kontrola]

Well, this really isn't my first cause the first ones I made were so crappy I didnt even bother saving em. Well here it is. Tell me ways to improve?

 

[alexdesire]

It has Potential.

Use more C4Ds.

Less of the Effect uve used over Renji.

And the duplicate in the background get rid of it.

 

[Vi3tb0i2ty]

It has Potential.

Use more C4Ds.

Less of the Effect uve used over Renji.

And the duplicate in the background get rid of it.

and text but its got potential like fmk said

 

[Kontrola]

well i tried to add more c4ds and tried to make my render come out more and i also picked much higher quality render and i came out with this

 

[frozenrat]

The first one was horrible, I don't even see how people saw potential in it.


The second one..

It's nice.

You improved vastly.

 

[Kontrola]

just felt like i needed to upload this since i myself couldn't believe how much i improved

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd41/_jay-j/proof.jpg

 

[Joser]

The second one is nice! Good job!

 

[D4NyZ]

Second one is really good but first, s*x.