Flyff web 1.0

[audisbroder]

Hi y'all,

This is my second time I'm trying to design a flyff website.
I need your opinion.

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1) Screen 1

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2) Screen 2

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3) Screen 3

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- audis

 

[Detox]

It looks like he's puking up the blue line:

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Also the slideshow doesn't fit, as it doesn't have round borders. All the other objects have round borders, why don't the slideshow. Another thing is that you have to learn to use guides when designing. Your objects aren't organized enough.

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<--- Guide lines

Lastly, the gap between the slideshow and the news section is way to big. To much empty space in general.

 

[audisbroder]

It looks like he's puking up the blue line:

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Also the slideshow doesn't fit, as it doesn't have round borders. All the other objects have round borders, why don't the slideshow. Another thing is that you have to learn to use guides when designing. Your objects aren't organized enough.

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<--- Guide lines

Lastly, the gap between the slideshow and the news section is way to big. To much empty space in general.

Thanks for your opinion/help! I'll now fix this stuffs :

 

[aleksjug]

It looks preety basic, I think you can do much better

 

[audisbroder]

It looks preety basic, I think you can do much better

That's my style. To keep it basic, easier to find out stuffs on it example as "CP, server status, etc".

 

[TheAnkou]

Nice for newbie

 

[Gravious]

There's a certain difference between "basic" and "your style".

Basic would at least have a proper layout, and correct alignment.
I know this is your first website, and I do think your designing skills will improve. But there's no need to show everything you produce while experimenting in this section.

Also, is this a development project or just to show your website?

 

[Moshi]

Seems really generic.
Your color scheme bores me, but you show potential. Why not mix up the styles and such?

 

[audisbroder]

Seems really generic.
Your color scheme bores me, but you show potential. Why not mix up the styles and such?

I don't have the psd file anymore, but I'm working on another website now.

I don't like the mix up the styles and such.

 

[Quget]

ladabroder it sucks.

It looks like it is stretched not really nice looking

 

[audisbroder]

ladabroder it sucks.

It looks like it is stretched not really nice looking

As I wrote on my previous post, I don't have the psd file anymore.

I'm asking you to stop with ladabroder, KrypToN started with that ****. Or nvm, your name explains pretty well.