-Sigh-
I'd normally tell you that this sucks badly, but I'm in a good mood.
Tips:
-Use a decent background, what flyff server would possibly like dog prints on their website? Doggy Flyff?
-Use more images, now its just dog prints & some text.
-You will have to learn some CSS and HTML to actually create a fun website. Do that first.
-Put some PHP in the website. There are enough scripts released on the forum already that you can just copy & paste. For example, a REAL online check-script, register, support and more.
There are much more thinks to give tips about, but I hope you will see these tips will help you into becoming a good website creator.