Lord Vader

[theninjaway]

 

[LunarMS]

Its Pretty kool..... im personally lost in the background 8/10

 

[theninjaway]

Thanks man, the background is just a c4d I found on my computers files.

 

[DaOdin]

Text is horrible, black and white signatures aren't nice unless your forced on it and i don't like the random red light. Your getting better though.

 

[DollFace]

Wow, MUCHHHHH better mann. :]
Goodjob.
You just need to even things out, so it doesn't look so messy.

 

[theninjaway]

Text is horrible, black and white signatures aren't nice unless your forced on it and i don't like the random red light. Your getting better though.

It wasn't a random red light, it was actually part of a lightsaber that I couldn't fit into the sig. I found the render at Planet Renders, did a search for Darth Vader and found it, titled Force Unleashed, or something like that. If you think the sig would look less messier with the part-in part-out lightsaber, then I can remove it. The BG was found and I sticked with it because it matched the render, as if it didn't then I bet that people would bitch that it didn't match.
Peace,
TheNinjaWay

 

[alexdesire]

Text iks nasty c4d need to blend better and vader should be in the middle imo :/

But

Your getting alot better.

3/10

/Fate

 

[corenex11]

a bit too messy cant figure out wat the right side is but ur doing great keep it up

 

[buzzfizz]

Yea, too messy, the lightsaber came from nowhere, doesnt have a flow, text is horrible. Though you're improving man. Keep it up