[Wallpaper][HD] Alien Desert Warrior

[Mucski]

Improved version

Original file

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[Thunda]

Did a good job there, but I think that the render needs a little more blending and it will be perfect.

 

[Flash1369]

original stock?

 

[Mucski]

 

[Flash1369]

and bg?

 

[Mucski]

Now want me to compose them too and rename it [Wallpaper][HD] by Flash1369? :|

 

[404]

It would look better with a gradient map on top. :w00t:

 

[Flash1369]

Neh, but copy/pasting and a bit of darkening and i could make that thread myself.

 

[Mucski]

Neh, but copy/pasting and a bit of darkening and i could make that thread myself.

Good point. Than why didn't you? You have no idea how many threads around here "I could do too" , but I didn't , and didn't made a ridicule comment on them either.

 

[Flash1369]

ridicule? sorry but you asked, i answered.

 

[Irahnik]

OHHH that wallpaper is from Rage. I recognize it.

MAAD nice job though.

 

[Mucski]

ridicule? sorry but you asked, i answered.

I asked nothing. You asked for the stock images so you can be ridicule about it. You don't know what ridicule is?

 

[Tiretism]

Work on the brightness and contrast, the colors and the depth.

Work on the realism of the piece. Work on the lighting, too.

 

[Mucski]

Work on the brightness and contrast, the colors and the depth.

Work on the realism of the piece. Work on the lighting, too.

Finally some advices.

 

[Keez]

ok so my advice

1:
the shadows seem abit off there well its shold be like half ore more shadowed frome that light source .

2:
the light source can't reach that place so it's kinda making the lighting bad

3:
and that scepter fore my eyes sems at the same level as the shadowed leg and thats not right try bluring ore changing the lighting so u cand add some dark colors on the bg under it




hope these help u

 

[Mucski]

hope these help u

Of course they help me. What people don't know , is when you create it , and look too much at the renders , you don't really realize tiny mistakes such as those , but yet they still visible. Unless you take a pause and continue the work the next day , criticizing , and advising always help.

 

[Keez]

yea thats true

 

[Mucski]

There , I made an "Advanced" version , with more "depth feeling". I had to repaint quite a few parts of the alien though , so it might not be the same.

 

[Creeps]

The second one is awesome ^^
The alien seems a bit too dark, maybe brighten him up a bit without letting the lightning feeling go off, because the shadow in the rocks on the right (I mean on the rocks themselves) should be darker than the shadow of the alien (Again, the alien himself) because it looks like the rocks are more on the back than the alien... Maybe dodge tool on the alien or burn too on the rocks idk.
Still pretty good thing mate good job and hope this helps a bit

 

[AreYouMETAL]

The second is better, but both is awesome!